tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post3923236212032677010..comments2010-06-04T22:39:03.586-04:00Comments on Online: The EndThe Goddess Hathorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06001211619053692699noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-8352732126524172932010-06-04T22:39:03.586-04:002010-06-04T22:39:03.586-04:00For the record, I really liked the original ending...For the record, I really liked the original ending! Brilliant writing! Really well done!Wildflowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02334688214801840394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-50998624645283762202010-05-27T08:52:35.848-04:002010-05-27T08:52:35.848-04:00Hi Hath,
finally I have the time to read the end...Hi Hath, <br /><br />finally I have the time to read the end of your story. I had to make sure noone would interupt me while I'm reading ;)<br /><br />Since I was one of those begging you to not kill Jen, I have to tell you not many would have done the effort to write two endings just because we reader demand them to be HEA. <br /><br />I've read the gut wrenching, yet awesome written original ending on T's place and it broke my heart. It was just that at this time, I couldn't stand to read sad stories, or with yours, story with such a heartbreaking end. Add to it my own fear of flying ( and hub has to fly often too...) it was just too close to my real life.<br /><br />I remember what your story did to me the last time I've read it. So bear with me, I choose to read only the HEA this time.<br /><br />For me, it was just perfect :)<br />You really have an awesome talent and I hope you will be back soon with another story xxxJudithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08086532905120600182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-74557961155220286792010-05-26T11:11:17.090-04:002010-05-26T11:11:17.090-04:00Hi
I found this a week ago and it’s a wonderful ...Hi <br /><br />I found this a week ago and it’s a wonderful story, beautifully written, I enjoyed it very much. <br /><br />As for the endings well I have to say that they were both perfect but for some reason the original ending dose it for me … don’t know why, but it just seems to fit better …. Used a hell of a lot of tissues though <br /><br />Thanks <br />CAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-73141622282860548832010-05-25T08:26:46.230-04:002010-05-25T08:26:46.230-04:00If I had read the HEA ending first, I would have t...If I had read the HEA ending first, I would have thought, "oh, sweet story, nice ending" and remembered the story fondly and with much appreciation for the excellent writing. However, having read the original ending first, the HEA just pales in comparison. The original was just......perfect. Sad, (heartrendingly sob-out-loud-and-scare-the-dog sad, even on the third read when I KNEW what was coming - an effect I'm sure you appreciate *g*) but it was easy to see from the writing that it was the way the author envisioned it, the way the story was _meant_ to be. Thanks for both, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! :)InTheseArmshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12127113316995897086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-53827437818768460702010-05-24T22:52:00.313-04:002010-05-24T22:52:00.313-04:00been reading this the whole day like 5 times now t...been reading this the whole day like 5 times now the orignal ending still makes me cry ha! yes after other 4 times of readin itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-43691717098179750902010-05-24T22:50:25.869-04:002010-05-24T22:50:25.869-04:00have to add.. it truly had a lot of feeling and em...have to add.. it truly had a lot of feeling and emotion on it broke my heart totally but i loved it.. i could feel and imagine richie cryin over it awesome work i cant wait for ur next work maybe itll make me cry as much as this one did trust me thats ALOT of cryinmikaheartrsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-70604397795403693622010-05-24T22:46:04.772-04:002010-05-24T22:46:04.772-04:00gotta agree with u tho the original endin had me c...gotta agree with u tho the original endin had me cryin like a babyy without its milk i preffer it made me love richie even more (HA!)so sad had me cryin truly moved me. great work . kinda think richie deserved his happy ending well he does but the original ending was just soo good soo sad u truly cant iamgine how wet my pillow was hahaha.. thanks for the fun story and for an ending that made me cry which ive been needing for a long time nowmikaheartrsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-83175515185876363602010-05-24T22:43:32.920-04:002010-05-24T22:43:32.920-04:00Jen, I have told you numerous times that you are a...Jen, I have told you numerous times that you are an absolute fantastic writer. Of course, I did not really like the original ending, but I must say that I was moved to tears. The ending had so much emotion in it. You really poured your heart and soul into it. I felt like I was there in the hospital room when Richie asked Hath to marry him and again when the wedding actually took place. I have not cried so hard in a long time.<br />The second ending was very nice-it did not move me though-it was just nice. <br /><br />I would never choose for Hath to die, but the first ending definitely was the better of the two.<br />Just my opinion.<br /><br />BonnieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-28872826112163316402010-05-24T20:28:37.176-04:002010-05-24T20:28:37.176-04:00Hath - First of all, thank you for the incredibly ...Hath - First of all, thank you for the incredibly fun journey this story has been. It has been one of the best stories I have read in a long, long time. Thank you taking time out of your busy life to write it & share it with us. <br /><br />Now for the endings. I can't say I'm a fan of the original ending but as a reader, I could clearly see that this was the ending that you, the writer, had the most passion for. You had my crying like a baby through most of it. That's a testament to you as a writer that you can invoke such emotion in your readers. <br /><br />I appreciate you taking the time to write a 'happier ending' for those of us who are suckers for happy endings. Sorry to hear that it took you 4 months though. Clearly it wasn't an ending you wanted but as the reader, I appreciate. <br /><br />I hope that you will share your writing talents with us again soon. I know, I for one am going to miss the Jen & Richie saga but anxiously await your next creation.<br /><br />Many, many thanks for sharing this with us. <br /><br />PegAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924779964111161260.post-41142816578909674502010-05-24T17:21:17.672-04:002010-05-24T17:21:17.672-04:00Both endings are great, Hath. I have to say so I l...Both endings are great, Hath. I have to say so I like it that I don't burst into tears reading the Alternate one. ;)<br /><br />Writing myself I can understand though, that it was hard for you to write another ending to your story. I'm not sure I would have been able to do it. Great job!<br /><br />~ Kris ~Krishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623562469804323129noreply@blogger.com